At birth, the nurses did not talk about other thing ... "What an ugly child of 78!"
Pepin For his mother was gorgeous, but the father, who already had another child, he would not want to hide it well and although he could not hide his favorite was the greatest.
Pepin was plump, short and short-sighted: the opposite of his brother. At school they called four-eyed pig and when he went with his brother always heard whispers that marked him as the ugly of the family. It even bothered to tease him.
already made a man was still ugly, but did not care too much for your sympathy will always conquer all. Yet one day he decided to change some things: began to diet, said the gym and was treated myopia. After several months and much effort Pepin was still not high, but it turned into a handsome hunk. Quite the contrary that his brother was now bald, fitness and premature wrinkles from too much sun for years.
Now when they were whispering together what was so attractive it was and how much it had improved over the years and how badly his brother was preserved however. And Pepin always eluded him a sly smile when he heard that now the ugly of the family was his brother ...
Pepin For his mother was gorgeous, but the father, who already had another child, he would not want to hide it well and although he could not hide his favorite was the greatest.
Pepin was plump, short and short-sighted: the opposite of his brother. At school they called four-eyed pig and when he went with his brother always heard whispers that marked him as the ugly of the family. It even bothered to tease him.
already made a man was still ugly, but did not care too much for your sympathy will always conquer all. Yet one day he decided to change some things: began to diet, said the gym and was treated myopia. After several months and much effort Pepin was still not high, but it turned into a handsome hunk. Quite the contrary that his brother was now bald, fitness and premature wrinkles from too much sun for years.
Now when they were whispering together what was so attractive it was and how much it had improved over the years and how badly his brother was preserved however. And Pepin always eluded him a sly smile when he heard that now the ugly of the family was his brother ...
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This story comes from the implementation of "creative plagiarism", a technique is to take advantage of the wealth of literature, theater and film that surrounds us, so as to draw four or five key points of the plot serve us to write a story, yes, bringing something more to than just plagiarism (you can change the end, make a new character, set in another era, with a current problem, etc ...).
In this case I chose to build on the story of "The Ugly Duckling", took as fundamental:
born 1 .- the ugly duckling is the family.
2 .- Your mother is ashamed of him and refuses.
3 .- Time passes and is still ugly.
4 .- The others tease and pick on him.
5 .- Finally longer ugly and becomes a beautiful swan.
added And my contribution is not only ceases to be ugly brother, but brother gets pretty ugly ... life, which takes many turns, lol ...
I encourage you to implement this technique. To me has been somewhat complicated, but it's worth a bit squeezed their brains and then see you get to invent a story, whether better or worse.
Hope you like! The next post will have much to do with it. (The teacher our creative writing, which makes us sweat blood, hahaha ...)
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